Saturday, January 17, 2015

karen's skiers

two problems with this one: i don't like how i have three caps and then two lower case. i like to mix them, but not first one and then the other.

can anyone guess what the second thing is that really bugs me?

i like the idea....but there is a glaring inconsistency.

and no, it is not the ugly sky. i guess that is a third problem.

this is an idea that i think is fine, but it just needs a lotta work.

7 comments:

  1. It's very early, but I'm worried about Karen hitting her house. E already looks like she's down and all 7 are leaving the envelope. Can you save them? N is only legs, not a smart letter, she brainless and leading the pack......love the horizon line as it goes through the stamp

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  2. Just had to say that I enjoyed Smash's comment. 😊

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  3. That it's in your house and not mine.

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  4. Tuck the R back a bit and it's great!

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  5. this is jean commenting....i can't wait to get home and create the chaotic scene following the horrific crash into the house. sometimes, when doing little people lettering, i get the feeling that it is my true calling....

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  6. thank you again smash for the inspiraton....and there are some previous comments that i will be bringing up in future posts. all y'all are so much fun :-)
    [again, this is jean commenting]

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  7. Ahhhhh, we are our own toughest critic. The sky looks typical for a cold, winter day.

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