I have not made up my mind on this one. It seems fine - but there is something about it that isn't quite right - and yet, I do not know what exactly is the problem.
Maybe someone can help me out and tell me what's wrong...
my brain is fried so i hope I'm articulating this well....@ 1st glance, i saw it 2; i feel its the white empty space b/w the 2 stamps which extends downward, separating the last name. in order 2 break up that column of empty space, the stamps would b better placed in the top center side by space touching one another.
I agree, the stamp placement seems awkward. The stamp on the right, in particular, makes a smaller Square than the four letters of Kane, and seems to throw the Symmetry even further out of balance. The base of the letters does not line up all the way through. I think it would be better if it did, but it would have required making Leslie smaller to match Kane. That would also have given you a little bit of white space at the left and right. Usually, when you say you hate one of your envelopes, I like it, so this is the first time we have agreed that there was something not quite right!
my brain is fried so i hope I'm articulating this well....@ 1st glance, i saw it 2; i feel its the white empty space b/w the 2 stamps which extends downward, separating the last name. in order 2 break up that column of empty space, the stamps would b better placed in the top center side by space touching one another.
ReplyDelete....in which case the address would need 2 b centered 2 balance it out
ReplyDeleteI agree, the stamp placement seems awkward. The stamp on the right, in particular, makes a smaller Square than the four letters of Kane, and seems to throw the Symmetry even further out of balance. The base of the letters does not line up all the way through. I think it would be better if it did, but it would have required making Leslie smaller to match Kane. That would also have given you a little bit of white space at the left and right. Usually, when you say you hate one of your envelopes, I like it, so this is the first time we have agreed that there was something not quite right!
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