Monday, April 7, 2025

FEB from Juliana. - one last AI example



 Juliana spent some time on versals. They are an inviting style which keeps drawing me back. When this arrived, I pulled out my little booklet that I used for teaching kids of all ages. I sent the booklet to Juliana. Hopefully, I will find the original and make a copy that I can post on my Jean's Exemplar blog. Yes, a new blog - with all my exemplars - not the ones with copyrights - just the rough ones that I did for my own use and for teaching in my *relaxed* style. I have not actually started the exemplar blog - but hope to.


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There were two votes for me to just stick with my own *voice.* One local penpal and one online pen pal,
So, the tribe has voted and we will proceed with the unfiltered Jean. Although, I had the following bit scheduled to appear and I am not going to delete it.

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At the exact same time that my laptop went through an updating of the whole operating system - my phone had to be replaced with something newer, I had a huge double learning curve to navigate. Taking AI for a spin was of no interest to me -- or so I thought. After trying it once, I was intrigued. 
 
The intrigue fizzled out after a day or two - but, I am going to share one more example of how a person who has had minimal lessons in how to write can make herself sound different. 

Here is what I wrote for the AI to edit:


This is the way I write when I am trying to explain things to people. I do not sound like I am very well educated. I would like to try AI and see if it can make myself sound more educated or maybe just professional. I think my writing is too friendly.



Here is what it offered as an alternative:


In my attempts to explain concepts to others, I often find myself employing informal language that may not convey the level of education I possess. To address this, I am considering exploring the use of artificial intelligence (AI) tools to enhance my writing style and potentially project a more professional and educated demeanor. I believe that my current writing style tends to be overly friendly, and I am eager to refine it to better suit the intended audience.


Here is what it offered when I clicked on *Concise*


I often use informal language when explaining concepts, which may not reflect my education. I plan to use AI tools to improve my writing style and project a more professional and educated image. I believe my current writing is overly friendly and want to refine it for the intended audience.


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Thus endeth my foray into AI.

AI just looks like steak sauce with a typo to me.


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