thank you susan, 3-4

two more rough ideas for susan. this time, i used the scroll tip of the marker. that's what gives it the double line.
on the top one, i left out the middle crossbar on the E
and the cross bars on the As
those are fun places to add a design element.

on the bottom one, i looked for a repeat letter - s -
and wrote the the two names with a shared S.
i also mashed things together because i like to do that.
and the name mashman is just asking to be mashed.

these two will appear again, once i finish them.
again, if you have names that don't respond to these two  ideas, lemmekno
and i will show you how every name can be subjected to every design principle.