this one is 50/50. half of it has some good ideas the other half is yucky. the idea of pale lines is good, but i should have used a ruler or done something more deliberate in making them curved. they just look *off.* the black lettering is too thick and clunky. chose the wrong writing tool. then, those little polka dots are creepy. they needed some darker orange or something. on the positive, i like the way the elements are arranged. and once again, i had the good postal workers looking out for my mail and putting the cancel in just the right spot. and the worst thing of all, that 6200 in a light pen. geesh....i have no idea why i did that. looks awful.
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